Right, I've started this song/poem, well, the basic start of a song, and I was wondering what everyone thought of it...
You can leave a comment if you want, it's not very good I know..
But here goes..
Would the sun shine brighter
If I wasn't around?
Could your voice seem louder
more profound?
Perhaps I'm not beautiful
in your eyes?
But why don't you come & save me
when you hear my cries?
With just one look
you could set the world on fire
There's so much in you
that I admire