Poems

[Rocky]

plz can u tell me if u like this poem

Without You
You aren’t the same person I recognised from before
You gave me the reason that didn’t make me useless
Now that you are gone
You thought I would never be needed anymore

You gave me life
You helped me to love again
You gave me hope
You saved me from the blade of a knife
Well that’s what you think

When you left
You thought I could never live without you
And I would go back to the way I was before
But you were wrong
I can’t believe I stuck with you for so long
All you did was make me stronger
Stronger than when I was with you

You see
You didn’t change me
You just hurt me like everyone else
When you left you thought I couldn’t live another day
But here I am
Standing on my own two feet
So goodbye to my so called hero
Good riddance to you
And I never want to see you again
I can deal with my own problems
Without you!!

[Dora Baggins]

When did you understand?
Which breath drew, knowing, harshly in,
And gave it flesh and bone and skin,
And sped your heart to beat upon ebon wings........

Author: Unknown, but does anyone know who it's by???

[Demona]

°Painfull Revenge°

What have I done to disserve your hate?
Did I create it?
You want me to leave your sight
I disappear into the night

I cry
Because I know this is the last good bye
My heart has been teared apart
Some one would call it art

I thought I couldnt live without you
And I thought you knew
I loved you so much
Why did you play with my trust?

I see you with this pretty girl
So all the time it was her
I was just the second choose in you eyes
So all your words were just empty lies

I hate you for hurting me
Why couldnt I see
What you were doing to me
Hurting, using, fooling me

I hate you more then everything now
Whats with you?! You thoughtless cow!
Im going to put you into the final rest
This is not some fake test

Im going to teach you not to mess with me
You dont know how mean I can be
I will tear you apart
So everyone can see your empty heart


plz tell me what you think

[MrsBloom]

~~~Legolas~~~

Legolas lift his bow
He shot the arrow swift and strait
He killed the orc
He made its fate

He saw a fair elf lady
He fell in love
He wanted to meet her
She was like heaven above

He met her again and again
She finally gave her name
Lady Nienna she said lightly
The day ended the same

He finally asked to marry her
She said yes and never left his side
She would ride with him to battle
On the same horse they would ride

They lived together forever
They would sit down together
And talk about the day they first met
And the beauty of eachother they remember

They lived happily forever
Wherever they may be
How do I know this
That elf lady was me

[Ûvatha]

These poems are all really really good!

Beaten
The smooth cobbles slip beneath your feet,
The rough wall grazes your hand,
Your shoulder,
As they push you into the room.

Dark stains on the floor,
Set your heart racing,
The rank smell of old blood,
Ingrained in the air.

Your eyes cannot penetrate the blackness,
Your ears strain for the smallest sound,
Every breath taste the air,
Waiting for the attack.

Waiting,
You begin to shake,
Palms become slick with sweat,
Lights dance before your eyes.

You cower,
Fear of attack mcuh more unmanning,
Than any thump or kick.
Psychologically beaten, you cower.

[Waelith]

That is so good Isilme, powerful, really powerful. Well done!

[Bezerker]

Sauron
King of darkness, prince of death
my troops are on a massive quest,
 to get the ring so the earth can end,
and i will be reformed again,
the ring will be on my mighty finger,
and all who dwell will not linger,
my darkest armys will spread the earth,
and give the good a nasty curse,
for i am Sauron the great,
and i will  kill and exterminate,
all who stand in around the bend,
will wish there dead before the end,
watch me kill sweep and watch me slash,
as i give you all a nast gash!

[Dark_Angel_@_night]

This is a topic for anyone that wants to see what people think of their poetry
 here is an attempt on my poetry. Not very good lol
Theres a new wind in town like I've never known
I'm breathin deeper than i've ever done
And it sure feels good to finally feel the way i do
I wanna love somebody
love somebody like you

I'm letting go for all my lonley yesterdays
I've forgiven myself for the mistakes i've made
Now theres just one thing, the only thing i wanna do
I wanna love somebody
love somebody like you

Yeah i wanna feel the sunshine
Shining down on me and you
When you put your arms around me
You let me know theres nothing in the world
I can't do

I used to run in circles goin nowhere fast
I'd take one step foward, end up two steps back
I couldn't walk a straight line even if i wanted to
i wanna love somebody
love somebody like you

Sometimes it's hard for me to understand
But your teachin a better man
i don't want to take this life for granted like
I used to do
I wanna love somebody
love somebody like you

[Doodle]

Nazgul

They are not living.
Nor undead.
They seek their masters precious.
And will not rest until the one who carries it, is dead.
The Nazgul, or Ringwraith as they are known.
Are the history's living.
But are the present's undead.
The Nazgul seek the One Ring.
And will kill the one who bares it.
They do not have feeling or a sense of humain touch.

Pretty rubbish, it took me like 3 minutes!

[Yalewen]

Tis good Pollz..
Well done!

[Doodle]

Thankyou Sash!

Hobbits

Hobbits are smaller than men.
Halfings.
They love their cheese, and cups of tea.
And drink red wine, heartily.
Hobbits are the kindest creature you can
ever meet.
They are bold, strong and couragous.
Have lived silent, un noticed through the
ages.
Yet Hobbits are gentile, fond and sweet.
Their their the cutest half-lings you'll ever meet...

[destiny]

that was really good congrats! it'd be a cool song aswel! post it on my songs by smeagol rox and you'd get so much praise cos it truly is gd

[LOTR FAN]

this one i have made my own

                       The Road goes on and on
Down from the door where it began.
Now far ahead the Road has gone,
And I must follow, if I can,
Pursuing it with weary feet,
Until it joins some larger way,
Where many paths and errands meet.
And whither then? I cannot say.

[Doodle]

If Only.

If only you knew how I felt.
If only I could be there with you.
And let the broken hearts be delt.
I can't say how it is.
Because it would hurt.
If only you knew.
How it is.
But you won't.
Can't.
Shan't.
If only you knew..

For my friends who don't really get me.

And Alex.

If Only part 2

If only you all could see
inside of my head
and see the working
of the clock
that ticks,
tick tock.
Or the rythem of my heart
that goes dum dum
like the beats of a drum..
Don't you see..
Pollz is a working machine..
Like clockwork.. or a musical
theme..

[thebritisharse]

ah poll that is excellent! well done hun!  
maybe i can begin to understand not just you but other girls too!

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