hmmm, wrote this about just over a month after something happened and befor soniaaaaa
the name of the poem is "up on a cloud" and there will be more to come, annnd sorry in advance for the bad ending which doesnt rhyme.
feedback is much appreciated
best to read it outloud
enjoy
Up on the cloud
They are so high . . .
Not knowing what can pass them by
My oh my
They don’t know why
Why everything has to eventually die
Hopes and dreams fade away
Away they go . . .
Oh so slow
They watch as the scars of our past
Forever live and will always last
From our mistakes we try to learn
But forever we crash and will always burn
Glancing at us they silently talk
While we swiftly move and slowly walk
In the shadows we silently hide
With the knife grasped by our side
Take one last breath . . .
We prepare for death
With one swift slice
The body dies
Away we go
To finally know
What lies beyond this silent Joe
But we awake again
At half past ten
To re-live the scars of our past
Hoping one day to die
eventually at last.